   zagato 2004-06-22 . chapter 1this is wonderful! |
 neilfatea 2004-03-09 . chapter 5 Classic, the pitch the atmosphere, this is what gothic horror should be. The build up is excellent. Dark is a gentleman, like all the best vampires |
 Aceles 2004-03-08 . chapter 5OH! AWESOME AND SPOOKY AND BRILLIANT AND-Don't make me go on. I've read this is one good go, and it took me a good forty five minutes anyway. I don't often do that, which confirms for me how good your story is! WOW! Just plain old good old vampire stories like this make me smile. I wonder what shall happen next...? Please continue!
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Aceles |
| Aceles 2004-03-08 . chapter 1 WOW this is cool...very nice, I like the details. Descritions are good, and I have a good, yet vague idea of Alexander's personality...hm...Will catching ms.serenity be as easy as he thinks? I suppose I should read on, shouldn't I? Oh yes, that's what I was going to say. Would you read/review one of my stories if you get the chance? Thanks!
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Aceles |
| Neilfatea 2004-01-16 . chapter 4 It took me a while to find this update, but I'm glad I did. It's good to see a writer that's prepared to build a plot rather than just leap in with the shock horror. The play between Goode and Dark borders on majestic. Who cares if they both end up in hell if they continue developing towards each other like this. |
| Neilfatea 2003-09-15 . chapter 3 Get's better and better. It feels in the period, but as you so carefully don't give a time, I'm sure there are others reading in a different time and place. The plot moves nicely along, but leaves space for the imagination to fill in. The pace is good, please don't be tempted to rush |
| ^_^ 2003-09-11 . chapter 1 This a beautiful piece of art. Please continue soon! |
| ^_^ 2003-09-11 . chapter 1 This a beautiful piece of art. Please continue soon! |
| ^_^ 2003-09-11 . chapter 1 This a beautiful piece of art. Please continue soon! |
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