Aw, what a pretty poem! I love the imagery in this... and the line about the shooting star seeing as it runs... very clever! And where the angels fear to tread... very creative line. I LOVE THE IMAGERY!

This is clever in how you switch ryhme schemes from each stanza. I have not read the word yonder in ages lol. A nice word... I don't quite understand the last stanza but could you explain it. I am sure it has a deeper meaning i can not quite grasp. Is it what the summers etc. will be like when you no longer see them. Or that what it would be like with out a spring or summer? Urgh, confused! lol,

McD

A bit of an odd rhyming pattern there, but it was still a very pretty poem. I love LOTR, too, so I can picture all these places. That was a good poem.

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Wonder and yonder do not rhyme and your poem has weird rhyming schemes but other than that it is a pretty good poem.