wow. i loved it. it's exactly what goes in my mind each and every single day. great job at a wonderful poem!
p.s. thanks for the review.

Very nicely written. I totally relate to this poem!

I can relate to you so much! Geez, I get real depressed and sad too, even though every one tells me that I'm perfect and pretty and all that stuff. I don't feel like that at all. Sometimes, I hate how I think too lol...thats a big one for me. Good poem though...a lot of us can relate

I can relate
with the more general feeling
but difs I could state
would be kinda like stealing
your poem from you
So I go -- saying it's appealing!
I hope time makes it less true.

you connected to mine, i connect to yours. people never see how i really feel. the mask is always there.

liked your poem. i wrote one sort of like this a while ago, but it didn't come out right, didn't have that feel.
thanks for the review.

This really affected me. I love the burst of emotion.

You're very talented.

Very deep. It seems so similar to my poem Hate. Check it out and see what I mean. This should be published in a book. Keep up the good work!

Very deep. It seems so similar to my poem Hate. Check it out and see what I mean. This should be published in a book. Keep up the good work!

gosh i hate all that stuff too.. i can relate... dont you just hat so many things in life (obviously since you have the poem, silly me) and yeah... great job!

Tara