 nesy 2004-06-11 . chapter 1You know, I've been reading all your poetry and fiction and no-one has ever told things as I think they are. You're the best. It's like you lived my own life. |
 Unchained Soul 2004-03-27 . chapter 1Aww this is beautiful... so much hoplessness but there's a sense of hope there at the same time. Good job. |
 aconsciousjulia 2003-11-29 . chapter 1sing it sista!
damn straight, i hear you loud and clear, and considering ive felt this very same thing before...good job capturing it...do keep it up
*jules* |
 Red-Impulse 2003-10-19 . chapter 1 Wow, thats really... um... i cant even describe it... it's just so good. It's very touching and emotional! I love it.
R.I. |
 Melancholic Angel 2003-09-24 . chapter 1 That was so...freaking...kick **. Well written. Nice structure and flow to it. Good job! |
 Grim-reaper-Zakku 2003-09-21 . chapter 1hey, nice poem, keep up the nice work ^.^ and thanks for the review |
 Needa S. 2003-09-21 . chapter 1 Very good. I like the depth you created in this piece! Awesome job! Keep writing... |
 Lazerponies 2003-09-13 . chapter 1Wow! This is great, I can relate to this, as, I assume, many others can, because you write it in such a way that it can be related too. The word choice is great; it flows nicely and gets the point across. Great job! Keep writing (: |
 Takada Saiko 2003-09-13 . chapter 1That was beautiful. I can't describe how wonderful it was. I understand to some extent what that feels like, b/c I feel as if I'm watching someone walk away and saying nothing to me. Lovely job! Keep it up
TS |