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| Jennacharm 2004-11-24 ch 2, | abuseThis is interesting. I like how you characterize Jessica's nervousness. |
| Hele 2004-02-08 ch 2, | abuseThis works well, and your style is unusual. You've portrayed the characters well. |
| Flotom 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abusevery clever! this made me laugh! you're work is brilliant, i really admire it. you use very interesting views and perspectives and use words very well and carefully. Keep up the good work! |
| Faiths Flower 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI like the story so far, I thought it was going to be about something else, but it's good. I'm wandering where this'll go.. I don't exactly know what I like about it, but I just like it. Your story is neat and easy to read. There are some out there that are horrendous in grammar, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere, I guess.. I definately did. Rule 1: Accept Anonymous reviews. You'll probably get more reviews if you do. :) Peace |