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Reviews For: American Women

Jennacharm
2004-11-24
ch 2,
abuseThis is interesting. I like how you characterize Jessica's nervousness.
Hele
2004-02-08
ch 2,
abuseThis works well, and your style is unusual. You've portrayed the characters well.
Flotom
2003-12-18
ch 1,
abusevery clever! this made me laugh! you're work is brilliant, i really admire it. you use very interesting views and perspectives and use words very well and carefully. Keep up the good work!
Faiths Flower
2003-09-11
ch 1,
abuseI like the story so far, I thought it was going to be about something else, but it's good. I'm wandering where this'll go.. I don't exactly know what I like about it, but I just like it.

Your story is neat and easy to read. There are some out there that are horrendous in grammar, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere, I guess.. I definately did.

Rule 1: Accept Anonymous reviews. You'll probably get more reviews if you do.

:) Peace
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