Now, this one was definately magical. The mood of this was kinda dark and mysterious. Great diction and imagery again.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

Ecellent job! I hope you got my invite I sent you one...Do keep writing you are very talented!

Wow, this is just great. The descriptions and rhythm of it are unlike anything else I've seen. Excellent job, hopefully you write more!

Wow, that was incredible. Such a dark and cathartic mood you've created. Simply stunning. I loved the last stanza.

BTW, I think all of the writers are lacking time for this site at present, so no need to feel bad.

BEAUTIFUL! You use such lovely images to describe things.

Oh prettyful...and sorta symbloic too...^_^

- Nicole

yay you're back! ! ! lol i was on the brink of sending you an "art thou alive and well?" e-mail. :P anyway . . .

this was so beautiful, so vivid, so enchanting. every line was really gorgeous. there's a great rhythm to it, and once again your freeverse is amazing. the feeling i got from reading it was all-encompassing ~ it completely sucked me in. i can't for the life of me pick a favorite stanza. as for favorite lines . . . "sobbing with nauseous truth," "sarcasm, a metallic wink," "the opal moon condescending," and "midnight, my cloak of stars" all knocked me off my feet. the last line in particular made for a splendid conclusion ~ a truly beautiful image. excellent work! :)

O.O speechless... i love this type of poetry, where it's freeverse and it just flows so beautifully, this is gorgeous. simply gorgeous. keep writing, you have talent!