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Jess Angel 2003-09-26 ch 1,	abuseNow, this one was definately magical. The mood of this was kinda dark and mysterious. Great diction and imagery again. Keep writing! Jess 0:o)
Needa S. 2003-09-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseEcellent job! I hope you got my invite I sent you one...Do keep writing you are very talented!
Lidless Eye 2003-09-11 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is just great. The descriptions and rhythm of it are unlike anything else I've seen. Excellent job, hopefully you write more!
The Black Rider 2003-09-10 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was incredible. Such a dark and cathartic mood you've created. Simply stunning. I loved the last stanza. BTW, I think all of the writers are lacking time for this site at present, so no need to feel bad.
Steppenwoelfin 2003-09-09 ch 1,	abuseBEAUTIFUL! You use such lovely images to describe things.
BVR (Too lazy to login) 2003-09-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh prettyful...and sorta symbloic too...^_^ - Nicole
glitterjewele 2003-09-08 ch 1,	abuseyay you're back! ! ! lol i was on the brink of sending you an "art thou alive and well?" e-mail. :P anyway . . . this was so beautiful, so vivid, so enchanting. every line was really gorgeous. there's a great rhythm to it, and once again your freeverse is amazing. the feeling i got from reading it was all-encompassing ~ it completely sucked me in. i can't for the life of me pick a favorite stanza. as for favorite lines . . . "sobbing with nauseous truth," "sarcasm, a metallic wink," "the opal moon condescending," and "midnight, my cloak of stars" all knocked me off my feet. the last line in particular made for a splendid conclusion ~ a truly beautiful image. excellent work! :)
charredrose 2003-09-08 ch 1,	abuseO.O speechless... i love this type of poetry, where it's freeverse and it just flows so beautifully, this is gorgeous. simply gorgeous. keep writing, you have talent!

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