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Reviews For: gypsy moth

Jess Angel
2003-09-26
ch 1,
abuseNow, this one was definately magical. The mood of this was kinda dark and mysterious. Great diction and imagery again.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
Needa S.
2003-09-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseEcellent job! I hope you got my invite I sent you one...Do keep writing you are very talented!
Lidless Eye
2003-09-11
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is just great. The descriptions and rhythm of it are unlike anything else I've seen. Excellent job, hopefully you write more!
The Black Rider
2003-09-10
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was incredible. Such a dark and cathartic mood you've created. Simply stunning. I loved the last stanza.

BTW, I think all of the writers are lacking time for this site at present, so no need to feel bad.
Steppenwoelfin
2003-09-09
ch 1,
abuseBEAUTIFUL! You use such lovely images to describe things.
BVR (Too lazy to login)
2003-09-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh prettyful...and sorta symbloic too...^_^

- Nicole
glitterjewele
2003-09-08
ch 1,
abuseyay you're back! ! ! lol i was on the brink of sending you an "art thou alive and well?" e-mail. :P anyway . . .

this was so beautiful, so vivid, so enchanting. every line was really gorgeous. there's a great rhythm to it, and once again your freeverse is amazing. the feeling i got from reading it was all-encompassing ~ it completely sucked me in. i can't for the life of me pick a favorite stanza. as for favorite lines . . . "sobbing with nauseous truth," "sarcasm, a metallic wink," "the opal moon condescending," and "midnight, my cloak of stars" all knocked me off my feet. the last line in particular made for a splendid conclusion ~ a truly beautiful image. excellent work! :)
charredrose
2003-09-08
ch 1,
abuseO.O speechless... i love this type of poetry, where it's freeverse and it just flows so beautifully, this is gorgeous. simply gorgeous. keep writing, you have talent!
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