 Jess Angel 2003-09-26 . chapter 1Now, this one was definately magical. The mood of this was kinda dark and mysterious. Great diction and imagery again.
Keep writing!
Jess 0:o) |
 Needa S. 2003-09-11 . chapter 1 Ecellent job! I hope you got my invite I sent you one...Do keep writing you are very talented! |
 Lidless Eye 2003-09-11 . chapter 1Wow, this is just great. The descriptions and rhythm of it are unlike anything else I've seen. Excellent job, hopefully you write more! |
 The Black Rider 2003-09-10 . chapter 1Wow, that was incredible. Such a dark and cathartic mood you've created. Simply stunning. I loved the last stanza.
BTW, I think all of the writers are lacking time for this site at present, so no need to feel bad. |
 Steppenwoelfin 2003-09-09 . chapter 1BEAUTIFUL! You use such lovely images to describe things. |
 BVR (Too lazy to login) 2003-09-08 . chapter 1 Oh prettyful...and sorta symbloic too...^_^
- Nicole |
 glitterjewele 2003-09-08 . chapter 1yay you're back! ! ! lol i was on the brink of sending you an "art thou alive and well?" e-mail. :P anyway . . .
this was so beautiful, so vivid, so enchanting. every line was really gorgeous. there's a great rhythm to it, and once again your freeverse is amazing. the feeling i got from reading it was all-encompassing ~ it completely sucked me in. i can't for the life of me pick a favorite stanza. as for favorite lines . . . "sobbing with nauseous truth," "sarcasm, a metallic wink," "the opal moon condescending," and "midnight, my cloak of stars" all knocked me off my feet. the last line in particular made for a splendid conclusion ~ a truly beautiful image. excellent work! :) |
 charredrose 2003-09-08 . chapter 1O.O speechless... i love this type of poetry, where it's freeverse and it just flows so beautifully, this is gorgeous. simply gorgeous. keep writing, you have talent! |