powerful. just thrumming with...power and emotion. I was drawn immediately. This almost had the ring of a love poem. Thank you.

Awesome work. There is really no one like Him.


~Heart of the Sword

I really liked this poem!! It is very awesome...He truly is the only God. I hope to see more of your stuff out here on the poem boards, there aren't enough writers for God whose work is as awesome and heartfelt and truthful as yours is.

God Bless, catch ya later...and write on!

Firstly, I really loved the calm tone of peace and serenity that this had; I think it helped it flow quite nicely. The wording... *sigh* You make me feel so inept after reading ANY of your work, and this is no exception. The third stanza was, at least to me, very romantic... I could be completely wrong, though. In fact, I probably am. ;)

O, I almost forgot... wonderful message and feeling behind the poem. Nice rhythmic flow to it as well.

Gah... I like reading your poems, and then I don't. I truly enjoy your work immensely, and I read it constantly, but then, there's this part of me that goes, "Wow... I must REALLY badly suck." :)

Awesome work.

Quite good. Unreligious as I am this had a rather calm and almost anciet feel. A step back in time. Well done.