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| Azrael 2005-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great. Very amusing, and yes I did imagine it with a cockney accent. I just finished reading Hamlet so this was an interesting finishing touch. "All the dappy old mare did was do herself in" my favorite line. |
| a viewer 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, now you're poking at a sacred cow. I happen to adore "Hamlet." And you must remember that this is not a simple matter; there is a lot of contraversy upon the subject of why Hamlet became so cruel to Ophelia. Or are you trying to be another swaggering Laertes ("fear it, fear it, my dear sister") or Polonious? Anyway, it can't help but be funny the way you've written it, but I still feel for Ophelia. |
| aode 2004-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseNice work for a sarcastic bastard... No, really. It's a good piece. Great work, and keep writing. |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI know this is starting to sound a bit repetitive, but I love it. It's Brilliant... You are very talented... |
| Werecat99 2003-10-28 ch 1, | abuseMy PC pretends to be working. Let's see if I can catch up... Hehe. I liked it. Too bad she didn't listen... |
| I am Gone 2003-09-15 ch 1, | abuseReally nice I liked the imagery in it. |
| XxintoXpiecesxX 2003-09-14 ch 1, | abuseSorry about the delay in reviewing I read this a while ago and the computer locked up when I was half-way through so I had to turn it off and forgot about it. The poem was't really funny but it was amusing in its own way. It was...different thats for sure. |