|Reviews for A few stumbled words|
| JJR Meerraf 1/16/04 . chapter 1
I really liked the ending, and the poem was also magnificent. Great work!
| Winged One1 9/9/03 . chapter 1
I like it! I think its about...I dont know. Never mind. Forget I ever said anything.
| Aimee Raven 9/9/03 . chapter 1
that is so good, honestly, brilliant, very very bood, loved it, keep writing. love and good luck, Phoenix
| ShadowGal 9/9/03 . chapter 1
Pretty good. A few parts didn't flow as well as others, but that's not too big a deal. Overall, nice. I especially like some of the imagery you used.