I really liked the ending, and the poem was also magnificent. Great work!

I like it! I think its about...I dont know. Never mind. Forget I ever said anything.

Good poem!

winged one

that is so good, honestly, brilliant, very very bood, loved it, keep writing. love and good luck, Phoenix

Pretty good. A few parts didn't flow as well as others, but that's not too big a deal. Overall, nice. I especially like some of the imagery you used.