I adored your work -- you put so much personality into your characters that it is really difficult not to like them. Or, perhaps it is because I am a goth girl and find your work very appealing...
Either way, please, continue to write and I shall continue to read with interest.

again, wonderful, truly art. reminds of Jimmy...(my brothers goldfish)..I"m not stoned at this moment..which might be a little odd..well yeah..

I don't think it's crap. Excuse the crappy review, I'm no good at reviewing. I'd like to read more of the same please :). One question - why have you used - instead of " for the dialouge?
Peace
Velvet