|Reviews for One Last Time|
| MagenDavid 6/7/04 . chapter 1
I am so speechless...
| Etheral 1/21/04 . chapter 1
Interesting. Realy cool. Very interesting vocabulary too!
| Mbwun 10/23/03 . chapter 1
Kinda sad and kinda uplifting at the same time. And your vocabulary beat me silly, I had to look up "chartreuse".:) Good poem.
He Who Walks On All Fours
| XtrM 10/9/03 . chapter 1
The only real flaw I can find is the rhyming. The rhyming itself isn't bad, I'm just trying to get my word out that poems are usually better, if not more mature, when rhyming is left out.
| Nemesis-Wolf 9/18/03 . chapter 1
Wow. I like this poem a lot. It's really good. If i've already said this, then, let me say it again, your quite talented.
| insert name here 9/9/03 . chapter 1
...wow...im speachless, theres nothing i can say to do this piece justice in my review, just know that it was beyond amazing...
| simpleplan13 9/9/03 . chapter 1
very sweet.. I like it a lot