Just like all your other poems, really well done.

It doesn't sound like the last few moments of someone's life. It sounds like a new beginning of hope; an ideal that may never occur.

By the way, I think you missed a line break at "A hand coming from the skies above A hand of kindness, a hand of love."

fantastic piece of poetry...

really sweet :) lots of emotions put in, and lots of sincerity too...

*I especially love the line: "into a new realm of happiness"*

Keep up the good work! :)

oh man, laiyee you are a great poet man... they all have so much emotion in them :) Great job :) Loved reading your works.

Very sweet and touching piece of writing with good rhyme and fair rhythm. Note that "dispair" is actually "despair" and "Revealilng a face I've never see" is grammatically erroneous though. But nevertheless excellent work!

Beautiful Poem! Like the other reviewer said you have minor mech things to fix. One that stood out to me is in the line "Revealing a face I've never see." The most logical thing to do, I think, is to change I've to I. But then again I rarely do good poetry. Nice Job!

that was sad but sweet...the rhymes actually flowed well, which is a rare thing. Yay! You have a few editing things--spelling, apostrophes, wording, and commas--but overall it was a good poem. Yay for you!