beautiful. but it makes me wonder where he went to be gone for four years. overseas?

Sounds like you are writing from some kind of experience. Thats when the stories get in depth. You've come a long way. I remember your first. Keep it up.

That was a great short story. She must have really been deeply in love with him to be sitting at the sunset every night. Man four years, that is a long time to wait, but i'd do it if i was that much in love. but ya know that will probably never happen to me. oh well i shall live a sad lonely life. great story. i will shut up now, bye.