but eternity. dosen't last forever, surly you now that?

lol, please keep it up!

mm..angsty. ;)

Very well written. I like it. It's odd, but I don't give a **. Very good job! Keep writing.

Wow. I love it. It's amazing. If i could ever be such a writer it would be an honor.

Awesome poem. I'm really glad i read this tonight, i think it was just the attitude i was going for. Loved it, loved it.

Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant! Okay, now if you want to read more of 'Drowning' there has been 4 more chapters posted, and please review, i'm in desperation! Okay, kool, and again, **en birlliant!!