Oh,please let me write like this about a "fairly ordinary garden"...

This is well written and very desrciptive, we as the readers are able to imagine the garden as the poem goes...

Nothing to comment on your writingskills, it is just good and well done!

Excellent work. I'm not ordinarily a fan of rhyming poems, but yours works, both in rhythm and meter as well as visually and moving verse.

Thanks for posting,

Lowell