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That was excellent! It flowed so well and the rhythm was awesome!

i love this, as for the title, i can't reli title it for you. It's your work, and the title should come from what it means to you.

XXNerfxx

Wow, this is so powerful.

Very nice. Though I am confused about the flow of the words, I can't seem to figure out the pattern to them.

As for title suggestions, it'll come to you. I could sit here all day and quote off my ideas, (my personal opinion being "inner demon") but that won't help. Just think. It might takea while, but it'll be there.