cool...

well written too.

Guy... this is probably the most hilarious story I've ever seen written in a manner that seems meant to be serious. There were a very few minor things I saw, grammatical errors and one time or two in the first chapter when the pace seemed to slow slightly and I wondered why I cared enough to read this story, but I'm glad I read as far as I did. It's a great piece of work, Writingguy, and it gave me a good, hearty chuckle. Keep writing.

This is a GOOD story. PLEASE keep writing I want to read more.
-A.B.

great story, MUST kno whats going outside of the dumspter!