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| Serena Athena Waideilch 2003-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseA touch odd but full of originality, like all your other stories of course. It would be really interesting if you added to it but if you don't want to the strangeness of it could pull it off as a cool short story. See you at lunch! Your Friend |
| Bubblewrapped 2003-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseNice little ficlet! Its amazing what can be inspired by dreams. It was a good story and well told. What tragic irony! Very sad. I quite enjoyed reading it, the loyalty of the vassal was inspiring. Keep writing! |