It's pretty good. I like the idea and everything. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but it seems like the last two entries don't quite coincide with Mercy's attitude in the first one. Unless I'm just interpreting the first one. It seems like she got over the whole "this having a journal thing is dumb" issue kind of fast. Or something. I'm not really sure, something just doesn't click 'right' in my head. It's good writing, though. :)

The up date was pretty good. Can't wait to see some more.

This is really good so far. Update as soon as you can ^_^

~Arayuldawen~

Interesting. Very interesting.

~Arayuldawen~

This is good so far. Please write more.

sounds good so far!