Hi, I really like this one! :) http://w.fictionpress.com/~skitbunny

Wow...this is really beautiful. The rhythm and rhyme create such a balance in the poem that it would be peaceful even without the beautiful words. Really loved it and I don't say that about everything I read.

I love this! Ditto on the rhyming scheme... I love "And live the dawn with me." and "strewn with stumble-stones", just fantastic use of words and imagery...
Wow.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?

Oh, very nice. I really like the theme displayed here: that no matter what we've done in the past, there's always tomorrow to start anew.
I like the second line in the last stanza "Though strewn with stumble-stones". We never know what tomorrow may bring. Loved it!

Lovely, especially the first stanza, and "And live the dawn with me." Rhyme and structure well done, not at all annoying. Overall a nice poem.

This might just be because I know you are a fur, but I very much pictured rabbits in this poem. I had this vision that a group of rabbits were on a hill, and saw the sunrise. As your poem suggested, I imagined them racing across the hills and living the dawn. This was a calming vision, and I enjoyed it. I know this is probably not where you were going with it, but that's what popped into my mind. :-)

short and sweet.
that's the best way i can put it.

^_^

there's something about this poem that just strikes me. I think it may be the fact that it has a cheerful 'heart', whereas most moving poems are slightly depressive. Nice rhyme pattern.

OO. wow, this is one of the best pieces of poetry i've read today. it's quite lovely and breath taking, and gods, i love the dawn.

I like this one too. It's seems more like a piece of advice than a poem, which should've turned me off (I'm a hypocrite, as my "poem" escape is the same thing...I hate it though) but the way you wrote it captured my interest. Congrats.

Wow this is so sweet and moving.Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.^^

Well done, though I'd expect nothing less from such a centered soul.

Filled with hope for the future and a strong sense of dependable friendshoip, dealing with anything that comes, "Though strewn with stumble-stones, Will hold no fear; no need there be to walk alone."

Beautiful. Full of hope, full of joy, full of that old nostalgia that comes with walking familiar paths under the last days of the summer sun. *re-reads what she's just written* that makes no sense...but it's what your poem made me think of. Thankyou for sharing it with us! ^_^

Wow. It's been awhile since you've written anything. Well i'm glad your back. Wonderful poem. I especially like this part:

The trail to tomorrow,
Though strewn with stumble-stones,
Will hold no fear: no need there be
To walk it all alone.

Awsome!

--Belle the Shadow-Cat

ok. i've read many of your poems and they are all fantastic! it's hard to put into words how wonderful your poems are. i wish i could write like that...