We are all here for you, dont you forget it. Very nice poem. I think i shall print it out.

Excellent! 10/10

ThE tRees On FiRe! ThE tRees On FiRe! LeTs All jUmP iN tHe FiRe In ThE tRee!

Are you by any chance an Evanescence fan? I notice a lot of similarities between their (excellent) songs and your (very well written) poem... plus you include 'evanescence' and 'paper flowers', 'tourniquet', stuff like that. Anyway if you don't know Evanescence I think you would like them.
Good poem

Ahh very nice, but it sort of lacks a rhythm. I love the song Tourniquet too, and this does the song justice.