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| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2007-11-24 ch 6,  | abuseOh. Cory is going to get his head cut off! OH NO! Raven is going to snap his head off. Lor is going to die and so is Cory. Just sad. |
| Back of Beyond 2007-10-27 ch 6, | abuseInteresting story - though I don't think 'humor' is a good genre for it to be put under. xD Drama would be better. Shame you haven't updated in years. :[ |
| Instant-Soup 2007-05-15 ch 6, | abuse-gasps- cory's selfish love it! x |
| i-see-faeries 2007-02-09 ch 6, | abuseWow, just wow. This is so intesting, correctly portraying human nature. I love it. Is it going to be Cory/Lor? I know that's horribly cliche, but cliche works in small doses ... Eh, what ever. It's your story and I'll love whatever you decide. Update soon! |
| lilylupin7 2006-08-05 ch 6, | abuseI hope you update this one soon. I rather like it. I want to see Cory stop acting like a spoiled prat...and get a clue. :) |
| paputsza 2006-07-25 ch 6, | abuseI LOVE this story. please update |
| Turnipy 2005-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like your story. Please, update. |
| Kaesydian 2005-05-13 ch 6, | abuseI don't mean to be pushy, but are you ever going to update this again? I rather like this story, and would like to see how it ends. Also, do you know that none of the links in your profile work? |
| Goldensong 2004-10-20 ch 6, | abuseArgh! What a cliff-hanger! I could grow to hate you for that very easily... Please update before I die from suspense! |
| Shoujo Kitsune 2004-08-29 ch 6, | abuseOh my god, what a terrible place to end! Is Cory going to get together with Michael, or is he going to be murdered by Raven? Is Cory's friends going to get intimate with the head hunter? Gosh your plot is so intoresting. Is Cory going to shape up and realize that being married might not be so bad, and is Michael ever going to get any? Great Fiction. Thank-you. |
| Turnipy 2004-08-14 ch 6, | abuseyou know what's the greatest crime on fictionpress? getting people hooked on a story and not updating or finishing it. please i'm going through withdrawal here. i'll give my brother for the next update... |
| Cinaed Born Of Fire 2004-07-02 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I really liked the final paragraph of this chapter! Gives a nice foreshadowing for the rest of the story. This was an excellent first chapter--really caught my attention. I'm definitely going to keep reading. *pets Lor and Cory* ~Cinaed |
| AethraZip 2004-05-18 ch 2, | abuseThe weird gets weirder, but that's good. I'm intrigued, and I'm gonna read until I reach enlightenment, dammit! |
| AethraZip 2004-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was.. different.. but a good kind of different. *nods* No comments at the moment. I must continue reading. |
| Rivana 2004-04-27 ch 6, | abuseDamn, why'd it have to end so abruptly? I was getting into this. The theme is so grateful, love misunderstood... Great writing too. |