Wow, I love this one. The images all fit together and it is so powerful.

Very good.

Entropy is a great word. A beautiful piece, I must say. I don't quite see the connection between the title and the poem though... But I do enjoy how pessimistic it is. I realize that the world is uglier than we all imagine, but "crime" isn't the only fault. Still, very nice. A "poet" is an interesting term. Who's to say we can't all be poets in some way? Of course we can. We don't all try, of course, but the ability is there. Take me for example: a freakish young girl taking poetic calculations from other artists in order to be "unique". Really, I'm not anything special. A ruined being can be just as beautiful as anyone else. You just need the will, and then you have the way. Poetry is hard; Thank you for expressing it. Great short piece, I enjoy it.

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woah, nice

ok didin't really understand it but ya ne ways i like the we can't all be poets part!

that was amazing, it flows, has great emotions, tones and imagery...great work.

please review some of my own if you have the time

thanx