I wouldn't say it was hilarius, but it was well written. Especially since you had 54 words, I counted. Well, 54 not including the title. LOVE THE MORBIDNESS!
P.S. love ur name also!

Is it wrong to think that's funny? It's so ** hilarious... I bet he loved it. Good job, man!

-Robin

O_O

Crepy!

but excellent ^_^

Not the best. It's good for 55 words or less. I'm too lazy to count.

way too lazy to sign in. i still think that this is so sad. you know, those 55 word stories are catchy, i kept on writing them, even though i *knew* that i could write longer stories! well, enough babble, later baby.