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| Major General 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI was spittin a hot 16 bars to this poem. I like this. You should keep writing. Check out some of mine :) |
| Bong2 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a sad poem. Your style of writing in this work emphasizes the melecholy of it-the repitition of last words for every stanza. Once again, WOW. Poetically Yours, B. Rosser |
| KM Barringer 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abusewow...sorry, I'm too amazed to say anything more... |
| colie -- still lazy 2003-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseman, i remember you reading this to me! i think i need to clean up my fav. list, i want to add this! and yes, the gulick would be very proud of this. well, i can't make this a long review, homework and stuff to do! ^_~ |