Beautifully written. It was a really nice collection of words, great job.

Beautiful with wonderful descriptions that really paint a picture in my head. Great job.
~God Bless

o...that sounds nice...but I was confused at first by the use of the word 'induced'...maybe I just don't know all the meaning of it...

The title fit the mood you set and that I got after reading this... the final two lines was somewhat a deviance from the perfection of serenity, but I'm pretty sure that was your point. Great work.

Beautifully soothing- so calm, peaceful, tranquil... I guess you picked a good title;)
A fresh and realxing picture, then adding that even your mind is calm and ready to dream.

beautiful poem!

I love the final line especially!


Thanks for the review on my poem 'moonlight sonata', but I'm not really using fiction press at the mo. I find I have precious little free time as it is with homework and everything, so really sorry, but the reviews were all much appreciated!

m...i'm there, that was beautiful...

It's very beautiful abd serene...just like the title. Reading this put my mind in ease, even for just a moment.

wow, im so calm, lol, amazing...hardly anything can calm me down. i actually feel like water now, wonderful, kudos.

So pretty...it reminds me of looking into a crystal clear lake for some odd reason. Keep on writing!

I like it, especially the last line.
>winged one

Beautiful poem, very soothing. Wonderful work! Keep writing.

so calming... great work!

beautiful!

-- swt breaths