This was a great cut haiku, I am challenged in that area. Excellent work!

*AbunaiChikara

Ps. Thank you for reviewing my work. It was very much appreciated.

It's nice to read more cut haiku these days; kinda like a way of remembering Princess Mulan since was the one who told us about them. I liked the second stanza best.

that is awesome stuff there! I haven't ever written cut haiku, but I do know that you write it well! I think that my favorite one was the last one. It was so cool. write on!

That is amazing! Excellent, I love the first stanza, it was creepy. Excellent!