I just wanted to say I adored this chapter for Latayna. She's the most amazing mother person ever.

Ahh I do miss this story. I always hate reaching this chapter because I know it's the last and it was almost there, to the end.

I wish I knew what happened next. Maybe someday you'll continue on with it a bit. One can only hope, mm?

WOAH WAIT, WHAT?!


THAT CAN'T BE THE ENDING, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?


you're cruel! CRUEL!



sequel =D?

awes this story is so good! :( well i hope u get to finish it sometime in the near future, because u hav a talent that only pops up rarely. :D

What? What? It can't end there, it's not finished! Argh, i just read this whole thing to find it isn't finished and it hasn't been updated in years! >.< ARRGH!

It is a brilliant story tho' and I love all your characters. I just hope this gets finished one day...

haha. i love the title :D

No! You are so cruel. I stumbled on this story, got addicted and now I find out its not finished! and you haven't updated in like, two years! Argh. Please have some pity and update. Please update. :)

this makes me mad that you wont update my favorite story on fictionpress.
just one more chapter to make it all nice and squared away maybe please?

OMG...Are you going to continue? Please say you are!! You just have to...Please

Great story although in the beginning it's all clustered together, [actual presentation] and some grammer mistakes in the beginning.

Really good, the characters are easy to connect with although I find Madeline annoying. update soon

i started reading this and i plan on finishing it sometime soon. its so good. i love it. its going on my favorites already

You NEED to update!! Even if it's just a notice on what is happening.

I really want to know what happens!

plz update soon. I really love this story and it's so close to the climax!

That was one of the best stories that I've read on fictionpress. Thank you for writing it; it was beautiful.

ah they kissed..love it love it love it...awesome awesome awesome..i trully am speechless!!