aww it makes me hungry! i wish i had some mooncake- whatever it is. lol. sounds good to me : O)

That sounds positively heavenly. I love the tone of this, as if you're just about to bite into it...

M, I have to get me some of that.

Btw, it is spelled 'having' (fourth stanza, last line)

w00t for mooncake! Sounds great. ^_^

~sol

Yummy! I regret that my mommy doesn't make these. I'll just wait till the next asain festival, but then they are all mine! *attacks vender*

Good job!

Thanks for the mooncake! (I am Chinese too)

The tempo (for me at least) reminds me of ching gay. Cheerful and gay. Good one this one.

By the way, is there really soybean and rice inside mooncakes? o_o? The only mooncakes I eat are the lotus paste with yolk or without yolk, chocolate, cheese, x.o and champagne..

mooncake tasty!! i'm chinese, so i celebrate that. ^^

Bah, I didn't even notice you added more poems.

Anyways, you did a great job on this. And now you've made me hungry...

beautiful description of a mooncake. yeah, i just kinda celebrated the mid-autumn festival with my family also. i don't like mooncake much myself, but i like the egg. great job on this. i really like the last stanza. keep on writing!

*starts munching on the mooncake*

This is so cool! I like how you've done the rhyme-scheme. And the last stanza was brilliant! Wonderful job!

~ CoolBeans18s

hey, thanks for your reviews! this made me laugh - mooncake - i have no idea exactly what it is, but i love the last stanza! Excellent, it just made me laugh out loud literally - isn't it so true and obvious that the simple things in life are often the best!
Good stuff keep writing!

Yay! *chews happily on the mooncake* Thanks! This was really great.


~Heart of the Sword

Beautiful image ... I can almost taste it.

ive never had one but they sound relaly good!

*Takes 'cake* And happy festival to you! ^_^ Great idea Mime! ^_^ And brilliantly done!

- Nicole xx