|Reviews for Two grey|
| Demetria 9/12/03 . chapter 1
i just read your poem and i think it is quite good,
I like your use of repetition and also the metaphor in the poem in which you compare the towers to candles.
It was a very interesting comparison on a very touchy topic.
Regardless, personally i feel it was very well written and thought out especially when you come up with a metaphor that compares bright flames to grey concrete.