Great story. Stella is very self-destructive and Armando seemed very confused but you couldn't help loving them. :)

Awww! I love this story! Hart and Stella have such a cute but complicated relationship. I kinda woner what happened with Lena though. Awesome story! Well written and planned!

awww this was a cute story! :)

Ri

This will forever and always be my favorite one of your stories. Great story. :)

This story is so sweet. The mood swings, fighting and the saying things they didn't mean had me gasping, and Blake and Stella's mom is so...evil.

This story has been so well written but because it is near flawless any mistake (unfortunately) jumps out.
I just wanted to let you know that you have a small error in this chapter. "I don't want to talk about this HEAR of all places"

But that said, I loved this story! I read it all in one sitting. Writing a review here though, rather than the end, because I wanted to let you know about the "hear" and also because I think this is my favourite chapter. Armando is so vulnerable in it.

Amazing

this story was beautifully written. i haven't found a good story on ficionpress in ages that has a good plot and very well written with minimal mistakes, although you always wrote my instead of may. i just wanted to let you know that you made my day and gave me hope in finding good stories to read and for you to continue on writing!

they should just get together already. they are only hurting themselves by being is just doing all that he can to push stella away, its so frustrating.

This wasn't the most memorable story for me. I don't think it will be, but it was beautifully written. Armando and Stella's chemistry is stunning, and so is the depth of everyone's friendships. I must say that the relationship development between Armando and Stella was not perfect. Ok, so it was perfect in the sense that it had its ups and downs and built up gradually, but it did not contain the element of memorable in which you make me, the reader, fall hardly in love with your characters. I personally feel that was the only thing separating this story from making it something I will remember weeks, months, a year from now.

That aside, this was very well written. The grammar was flawless, the plot was good, and Armando is smokin' hot. All in all, I did enjoy this a lot and well, thank you for the lovely read.

Its been awhile since a fic made me cry. I love how you write the story, it feels like im watching a movie right infront of me that the actors are really good were i could exactly feel there emotions every word they are saying... I always knew that HART loved her way back,eventhough he tells STELLA how much he loves LENA, I can still feel that there is something more than that. He is holding back same goes with STELLA. Love is really SOMETHING it concerns everything from simple facts to huge things that may change your life forever.

I love the story everything about it.

brilliant story. cant praise you enough and sadly i am about to be late to work so i stick with brilliant. thank you for sharing it with us all

oh, btw, ur song lyrics are AMAZING! too often one of the characters will "write" something, whether its a song or an article or even graduation speeches, and it turns out to be a flop despite the character's supposed success as a writer/singer. but ur song lyrics, esp for stella's song the latest attraction, are REALLY GOOD. juz wanted to say how much i love them! i mean, i can feel the RHYTHM, ya know? :)

this is an amazingly BEAUTIFUL story. ur characters are so real and the emotions are so raw... it really takes my breath away.

This story was amazing! Full of raw emotion. It portrayed the realistic, yet frustrating, behavior of two people denying their love for one another because of their need to preserve themselves and their pride. I loved it from beginning to end! Finally, a story that portrays real, broken people rather than the perfect relationships that are so often portrayed. The pace of the plot was very well handled. Can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the awesome writing. Your tone and style of writing is truly impressive and I really appreciated it.