aw
when is this gonna be updated!!

i am hooked =P

I really like this story, i think you had a great idea. I have yet to read the other chapters, but the beginning is great!

XDD I LOVE that last line!! *is cracking up*

XD CD

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I wonder... will you ever consider finishing this and soul seer? This was definitly my fav. story, if you ever finish it, I'd edit it and send to a publishing company... (I had this random urge to re-read it. and soul seer, I'll have to ask you later about that. Zirrach's still a hot as ever.)

That Was awsome!! Please continue with the story, i can't wait until the end

Great story but you really should try to update more but i can understand if you can't, my own story is on the hold too heh heh :-)

very good
ok it was great
i liked it so much
i told my friend
Soccer Angel about it

I love your this story. It's very well written and has a great plot. Please update soon.

I luv Zirrach! MORE MORE SLAVE! *your buddy laughs maniaclly* um... yes...

YAY! *cries of joy* ^^ hehe yah I loved it! ^^' SO happy that you continued! Don't leave us hanging agian ok please? lol ^^'
~Sugar*Bunny~

hehe.. *hugs wind's flame* oh.. g2g.. but it's cool. The reuinion seems a little sudden or akward; and the treck into the demon lands was really realy quick. it's still cool, tho.

YAY! haha dress.continue really really soon!

- PLEASE update soon!

col! the like the way this story is going! WAI PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE SOON!