hi

your story is missing the first few chapters

the story starts at chapter 4, where is chapter 1,2,3 ?

i want to read the story

it looks intresting. put in chapter 1,2,3

a great story i must say i hope you keep writing because a person withthis much talent should never let it go to waste

update soon

nice story! update soon!!

I'll have to say William's my favorite

This is one of the most immaturely written stories I've ever read. It's more like an outline than anything. I don't feel as though I know the characters very well because we know very little background information on them and we actually know very little of what's going on.

Other than that, with a little meat on the bones, I think this could be on of the most fun plot lines I've ever read.

underestimated

okay i just read this story all day today and if you don't update it will be hell for you...cause i will keep reviewing or emailing you till you do
with much

Awesome story, update soon ne?
We Could Be Gone

hey, these aren't as awful as you keep saying! i like them! and i keep laughing at how hilarious it would be if the real harris were doing all this stuff :D

update soon

well I ca n;t wait to see what happens nexts I can just see a huge twist comeing up soon!

OMFINGGOD Please write more!

nice transition, can't wait for more
~Mel

Told u I was going to drop off another random review! I'll drop off a few more next time. See ya around! ur a GREAT author!

Hey! I'm a new reader of ur story and I just LOVE it! I'll drop off some other reviews and some other random chapters to boost ur review score. LOVE UR STORY! UPdate soon!

"Oh joyous day! I'm so happy!" As sweet as that is, it's a bit corny. I'd prefer him to be slightly more masculine. Otherwise, it's awesome.