This is the weirdest story I have ever read (with the possible exception of "Things That Go Bump In The Night" by Twilight Moon) but in this case, weird is good. I really like how you switched from what was going on in the movie and then what was going on with Patti. It was kind of confusing, so I read it more slowly, and I understood it better. This is kind of scary to me because I have choked really bad before while watching a preview for "Old School" at my sixth or seventh time watching The Two Towers, I had a mouthful of skittles and popcorn and I couldn't swallow it so I drank some water and it all went down the wrong way, my friend was like "are you ok are you ok?" and I was choking and coughing and making some kind of "uh-huh, one sec" ever since then, skittles have scared me.
I'm sorry. Why did I just write that? I don't mean to bore you with stories where I have almost died (of which there are many) like when I almost drowned, got hit by a car etc etc etc
Good writing. Sorry about the rambling review.

I made my way to this story after reading the one about the man who hated the moon. This one is by far the superior story. Although the story is short, you really give a feel for Patti's character. As the paragraphs grow shorter the story really picks up momentum and the ending is very memorable. Good job!

Wow. Creepy. The horror movie that Patti was watching sounds kind of cool. You know, this story is very different from all the other ones I've ever read. It's actually very good! I think I'll pay attention to your other stories too...
'Slayer

Wow. That was terrific. it didn't exactly have much of a plot, but i'm guessing that, as a short story, it wasn't supposed to. It was really well written, and all i can say about the end is that it definitely wasn't one of those average endings where it's completely obvious what's gonna happen next. i LIKE it! Oh, and thanx for reviewing my story. i'm taking out the flashback signs as soon as... well, when i get to it. hehe. Keep writing. it's clear that u have a talent for it.
~Little Monkey Child

Thankx for your review! Wow, this was an awesome story. I cant believe that happened. Keep on writing cause that was definetely worth reading.

What a twisted ending. This is such a good thriller. Seriously, the ending couldn't have been better.

Hey... Great story... did'nt really freak me out but the plot was really nice! It was confusing at times, especially the last part but overall this is a really good story. It'll be in my favourites too ;)

this is definitely going into my favourite list. great twist in the end. very creative... i like your writing style, descriptive and detailed. great job!

Nice story! The twist at the end was really unexpected and it goes along well! Keep it up! I'll read more of your stories when I can and review them!
Ciao. Ciao.

Lots of LURVE
~septalia~

Nice, very nice. Chris, who's last name I'm not supposed to know. Very...dramatic. Nice how you intervowe the two stories, a little confusing at times, but I'm just stupid like that. Poor drunken lady. I feel sorry for drunken people, I mean, I am Captain Jerk Face...the great pirate. Yeah, I've got nothing. Go you!!

As I've said before, I really enjoy this story. I love any kinda thriller where you get a shocker ending. Good job, Chuck.

Awesome story. I like how it went back and forth from the movie to Patti. I loved the end, very unpredictable. You have a great writing style here, very fluid, yet very detailed and realistic. Great work!
~Egyptianfrog