O_O The emotion that you captured was *stunning* I sat here for awhile; I believe I was a bit dazed. Excellent poem - amazing.

I have felt this way many times.
Your wording was beautiful and dripping with emotion. Great topic to choose; there's a good chance that I'll be thinking about this one for awhile.
~God bless~

Beautiful...Excellent job!

so beautifully heartfelt...

very cool write!! I know how that feels, for I cry too. For many of the same reasons as you. write on.

You know what eeriely reminded me of? A psalm. This sounds just like one of David's cries to God. Don't ask me why I got that; I'm weird like that. :)

This is such a beautiful peace of work because it's just a cry out to God, and even then you can make it into a gorgeous work of art (well, in the writing world, at any rate). Nice ending, as usual. Cheers! (And hugs!)

*stands and appluads* This was such a beautiful poem! It was astounding! Absolutely splendid! Excellent excellent work!

~*~AbunaiChikara