   Summerdazed 2003-12-14 . chapter 1too true, so what if it's simple? it's wonderful!!
=summerdazed= |
 obsidian katana 2003-11-23 . chapter 1nice haiku. yeah, the starry blanket does create a nice sense of peace that one would want in a shelter. nice job on this. |
 Morncreek 2003-11-10 . chapter 1Another great image-evoker! Good job. |
 La Solange 2003-10-15 . chapter 1Very nice... I always love reading good haiku writers' poems, because it's done so nicely... keep it up. ^_^
~sol |
 Lady B.V Rose 2003-10-07 . chapter 1Oh...my...GAWSH! This is fantastic! Its so sweet and beautiful and totally on my favourites list!
- BVR xx |
 mizu no kokoro 2003-10-02 . chapter 1wow, i would of never thought! great! |
 The Light and The Glass 2003-09-27 . chapter 1this is so great, its an amazing haiku. i just love it.
>mysterykittyx |
 Keep it 100 2003-09-20 . chapter 1Cool concept.
~Heart of the Sword |
 Kelly A. Brown 2003-09-16 . chapter 1OOh, I likey. Good job! :D
Char |
 Crow08 2003-09-14 . chapter 1I have a strong desire to go camping. |
 teh tarik 2003-09-13 . chapter 1o...I don't mind sleeping under the stars! ^_^
THat was really good, keep it up! |
 OracleVIII 2003-09-13 . chapter 1Yeah, great write. I liked this, keep it up. |
 simpleplan13 2003-09-13 . chapter 1aw really sentimental & cool... cuz its like you pity him but you also make it seem happy |
 The Black Rider 2003-09-13 . chapter 1Lovely haiku. I agree, the stars should be shelter enough these days. |
 CoolBeans18s 2003-09-13 . chapter 1I love sleeping under the stars. This was wonderful! Especially the last line.
~ COOlBeans18s |
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