Spectacular poem. wow i've never read one that's so good besides Shakespeare. I am amazed i know not what to say (Hermia- a midsummer night's dream) seriously i don't know what to say that would match up to this poem. *^_^*

You know, this is pretty good. Keep writing more poems like this!

hiya Flaed!

(OO);;...(_ _); and to think you said you couldn't write romance. (TT) You had me hooked on the first sentence! I was like...DOOD! RUN AWAY! but seriously, that was really really sad.

you should get that published before some blood sucking bottom dweller comes and takes it from ya. *nodnod* yup... I am not a blood sucking bottom dweller just to let you know.

Really really fun to read! I like poems that let you catch onto the beat really quickly, and this one did exactly that. great job Flaed!

angelkohaku (^^)\V/

*sniff* so good and so sad! ;__;

D/s; yes,m it was very good . . . hikari, you are moistening the computer . . . IT'S GONNA SHORT *screen goes fuzzy than black* . . . circuit

Whoa. . .

I swear, if I could have thought up ONE VERSE of that, I'd be in Harvard right now. But darn you! Now I'll be up all night wondering how any modern human being could ever write so well in old English!

Hehe. Well, that's my way of saying "Well done!" I should show my Language Arts teacher this! I can just see him now; kneeling on the ground, tears streaming down his face, arms and face raised to the sky: "THERE IS HOPE FOR THE NEW GENERATION! THERE IS HOPE FOR HUMANITY!"

The meter was unusual, but appealing anyway. I liked it. It felt like one of the fairy tales my grandma told me when I was a girl.

Good work. It has the innosence and the beauty that most stories lack these days.