If this is your life, how's it mine?
Kidding.
Anyway, all in all this was a very creative way to portray everything.

Wow...your writing talent scares me sometimes...this is by far my favorite piece by you, it's just...wow...*is too blown away to say something that might sounds remotely intelligent*
yours in awe,
.:jalisco:.

Beautiful. *applauds*
chibichocobo

WOW THIS MADE SENCE LOL

confusion...
I get it, but like, i DONT get it.
Its making me think, and that worries me
because when I think, my head starts to
hurt... O... there it goes... >

Omg... I'm obsessed with this poem... it's got to be one of my favorites. I read it over and over again. I love your use of irony, allegory, and symbolism. Calliope rigt htere!! hahah, this is the best...

I also love how you chose to spell those words... wow, you really put a lot of thought into this. TT_TT this poem nearly drives me to tears cuz it's so good. Such good work Teresa. Keep it up!

on the contrary, I love the ranting of the poem! It explains the symbolism more clearly, and I LOVE the symbolism in this. Great work!

Interesting poem.

Great story! Thank you for reviewing my poem. I have others to. I really love your stories. Animequirk
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