interesting, odd yet quite interesting

Augh! Big words are melting me! Ok *cough*. I liked this one cause it's just rather random and interesting. Sorry to hear about the test in A/P Euro which you're technically not in. Good luck with it.

Seems like something I'd say aloud to myself when I'm alone during the late nights just sitting around in darkness. I love it...

It's not idiotic. It's between poem, and story, but it's good. You have a talent for these things. You should write more, and don't call your work idiotic, it is in my opinion, good. By the way, how come darkness is comforting? Isn't that hell?! That's endless death and suffering.

this is going to be amazingly like all of my other reviews of your stuff...

you scare me, yes, you scare me terribly

it's fun to get insight on what other people think about something like this... i'm learning that we have a lot in common besides our love for zim. you think like i do and i love it.

hm *nods* I'd say something, but I tend to sound like an idiot when reviewing people's work. especially when it's good, and much better than anything I could ever write. so, I'll just try to tell you that I liked it muchly, while trying not to sound too stupid. But I don't think it's working. I read your profile. yes, I have no life, and I think I should stop writing now, I'm probably annoying you, but you like Garth Nix! I love Garth Nix's work! And I only know one other person who has even READ one of his books! so, yeah! Thanks for all the reviews! i almost died when i opened my inbox and there were reviews! thanks. I'll probably read some more of your stuff later, but I'm supposed to be working now.

* blinks * morbid are we? :p I don't like this "piece" as well as some of your others... but maybe that's cuz I'm not feeling all angsty at the moment. In fact I'm in such a good mood that the fact I'm reading and reviewing morbid stuff is more like a joke (I just got back from Mike's house ^_^ I know, I know, I'm a sap and proud to be so)

That was . . . interesting, yet rightfully true . . . and somehow familiar. I really don't have much else to say - feel loved that I'm a faithful reviewer person. ^_^ Hey, wasn't this in that notebook? Hmm . . .
-Mizu

Great definiton of death and great, emotional choice of words...well done :) and keep writing

ps. if you have the time could you review some of my own works? thanx