Oh God...
This poem was aboslutely beautiful.
I'm sitting here teary-eyed and getting weird looks from my stepmother...
Really, I can relate to this poem. A shocking, but perfectly placed last paragraph/phase/canto (whatever).
I'll read more of your work, and I hope it's as good as this. Terrific, thanks for sharing :)
~L.L.~

sweet

This was a pretty, sad poem. Although I liked it, I've liked some of your other poems better. GOD! I can't spell peom pmeo POEM today! Argh! Keep up the good work! (don't write any more poems cause I hate spelling that damn word)

Hmm, very cool way to go about things. I liked the detail put in, and the imagery as well. *snaps fingers* dammit, why couldn't they have let go! *ahem* anyways, thanks for your reviews as well, oh great shadey one, or in this case, two...

This is soo good, damn it! It's so nice, no wonder Mizutaka placed it on her favorites list. (Question: Are you relatives, or friends, or sumtin?) Anyway, thanks for reviewing my story, Chapter 7 is up. ^_^ I hope you'll continue reading it, oh, and sorry for the tenses, I'm not too good at it. By the way, I hope you'll write some more of these poems, they're so good...

sad, but in a way beautiful.
And I love the ending :)
(Oh, and thanks for your comments on my poems) ;)

this reminds me of how i feel sometimes about life--it sucks so bad but i love it so much that i can't end it. also reminds me of my own poetry. i think it's wonderful.

Woah... deep. I like it. I like it alot ^_^ it makes me think. It makes so much sense it's freaky.

OK. i liked this one, and i dont usually care for interpersonal stuff. I am angered now by your talent. and mikes hat.

Very good, nice image... anything about letting go has seemed to quirk my interest...

~C Shot~

As for the chords you asked for, I am having a very hard time fitting them to Light of an Eclipse once me and my best friend get something we like on it I'll email it to you.. but it's proving quite a challenge.. should we go more ballet or rage with it?

I tend to avoid using this phrase, being the person that I am, but at the moment I can think of no better way to sum it all up: Oh My God. *stares speechless for several moments* This is a ** awesome poem and you should feel loved because it isn't often that I swear to get a positive point across. It's so . . . mind-numbing! Gah. *drools*
-Mizu

rar.
Thats it I'm moving back I don't like these constant death and suicide references...
but other thatn that damn youand your mad writing skills*shakes fist*