That was most different, but well put together none-the-less. By "Angel of Temptation," do you mean "Succubus?" I guess I'll never know the answer to that.

good story, itz original

hm...such a difficalt decision! i go with option number...1! will that was intersting...and very detailed!

This was a great, short story! I really enjoyed reading it, and I liked how you made the main character think more about the offer than immediately take it. I probably would of been happier if he confused his love to the one girl he did love, but still, I'm a hopeless romantic, lol. Anyways, I didn't find any mistakes in your story, keep on writing! =D

Because it's cool

Hm... Short, yet sweet. I like! Very nice indeed...

Naru: (hmph) Sucking up to the Urashimas, mm?

Talon: (shrug) THey deserve praise, my dear lady... And I use the term loosely when it comes to you.

Naru: (growl) Come back here! (chases after Talon)

Mutsumi: ^_^* Ara... Anyway, Kanako-chan, it was wonderful! Everything you write flows like a river through my synapses! Ara, or so Talon says, and that's how it feels...

Weird, but really, really, really good!

-sigh- I envy your writing.It paints a beautifel world.

*Looks around suspiciously* Will there be another chapter, or a sequal? Cause it's really good and caught my attention.

you should somehow add on to this...its pretty cool.