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Reviews For: Flashing Sword
La Solange 2003-10-12 . chapter 1
:o! Don't hurt me, o Great Sword! For I am but a poor, measly--
CoolBeans18s 2003-09-14 . chapter 1
Man, Rach. What were they doin' to ya in that poetry class?! *grins* Love the haiku, though! Amazing (for once)!

No, really, it's truly great!

~ CoolBeans18s
Miz E. Mak 2003-09-13 . chapter 1
Awesome haiku! I love the imagery you give here. write on!
teh tarik 2003-09-13 . chapter 1
Reminds me of those kinghts-in-shining armour...Great work.
AutumnRhapsody 2003-09-13 . chapter 1
The imagery is really good, and I really like "gleaming fire, and also how "destroying evil" fit on the last line, by itself.
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