Arg! That can't be the end! (Well, actually it can, but it's too fun of a story to be the end!) :) Love your characters! Wish it could be a longer, more developed story. Could be fun! :)

OMG! its a muskrat!..no wait..its just a totally rocking story! WOWZA!

as i said earlier- it's interesting.

LMAO! i mean, oh no! poor kashani, she never got to have kids with ran. poor slash and ashra, who never got to make love. poor car and vulpe who never found their meaning in life. poor muskrats for not being recognized. and poor villager one. ...

that was funni

Still trying to rally my friends to make Ashra's Adventure, but having some success =D We were at a museum the other day and I saw a MUSKRAT! And nobody else seemed to notice the glorious thing, so I was forced to say LOOK! A MUSKRAT! RAWR! at the top of my lungs. One of my friendses was there, (the one who I want to play Ashra) and she got it and laughed, but everyone else just stared at me.

*sigh*

Everyone's a critic.

Hi! I was wondering if my friends and I could make a movie of Ashra's Interesting Adventure? My email is derek@thefeldmans.com, and I would appreciate it if you would please respond to me at that address! ^-^ Thanks! Derek

that is so funny! its well good! if u write another one tell me cos its so funny

This is your only review, self. I am very sorry for you... me? um.. yeah. AT LEAST YOU KNOW THAT I LIKE IT! *sobs hysterically into own shoulder* whatever. Not sure how I'll complete that last task... hm *ponders it deeply* oh, right, the review. Funny, random, *sniff* it's wonderful *weeples off somewhere...*