   Writing4Eternity 2006-08-02 . chapter 10Loved it |
 BehindBlueEyes52 2006-06-28 . chapter 9Very entertaining. I think you could have developed the story a little bit better. It's very fast paced and there are a lot of grammar errors. This is ok though. It is a great story with a great plot. I know this probably doesn't do much considering it has been about three years since you finished this story, but I just wanted to share my thoughts.
Kristen |
 atreyu love 2006-02-26 . chapter 10 im gonna go read the sequel the sequel sequel sequel! I love it! :) fantastic! :) fantastic fantastic great! i cant stop giving compliments! ^^ |
 Tiffany23 2003-12-30 . chapter 9This story is great. I loved it. Can't wait to read the sequel. |
 bloodmoonrising 2003-11-25 . chapter 9I LOVE YOU SHAWNIE! |
 zagato 2003-11-02 . chapter 6Great story! |
| El Lobo 2003-10-02 . chapter 10 yay well hurry and write it! |
 Bubbles2 2003-10-01 . chapter 9hey! of course i want to see the sequel! are you putting it up? or sending it to people? |
| Smurf 2003-09-30 . chapter 9 I loved the story. I would love to see the sequal. I think the only thing that could have been improved was the fact that it kind of jumped from he left to she had a kid and I think a scene with her discovering she was pregnant would have been cool. Still one of my favorites though:) |
 SpawnMeister666 2003-09-30 . chapter 9I for one want the sequel. But then, I always was greedy like that!!
Spawny |
 diSasteRangL 2003-09-29 . chapter 9is that the end?!?! there's no more? but everything was so great and... =[ aw... that's so sad!! i mean, for me. the story was WONDerful!! ^_^
AIM: disasterangl |
 Kawaii-Turtle 2003-09-29 . chapter 9Ahh! I was about to kill you for ending it like that! Heh. I'm so very violent. oo; Yes, yes, yes. I want to see the sequel! It was a great story. Loved it. Yup! Going on my favorites for sure. |
 biblioholic88 2003-09-29 . chapter 8That was an awesome story. I loved it. I am curious to know Spencer's reaction to Abby. Could you write another chapter as an Epilouge with that, or if you are inspired maybe a sequel. (That's probably just wishful thinking on my part) Anyway I loved it, and I hope you keep writing because you have a great talent for it. |
| SpawnMeister666 2003-09-29 . chapter 8 Bummer...its all over! Just when I was really enjoying it as well! Great finish though, and you left it open for a sequel as well which is good!!
Very impressed!
Spawny |
| Bubbles2 2003-09-28 . chapter 8 hey! that was really great! its soo cute how abby looks like her father. are you going to do a sequel? i hope so! |
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