hurts.
nicely put together. but still, hurts.
-love, enat

I've seen that happen to many a friend, as well as myself unfortunately. You put this degree of yourself in your work just right so that readers can feel along with you, if even for but a moment. I'm sure we all give thanks.

wow, i think you really conveyed the feelings of hurt well here. sometimes rhyming doesnt work but i think on this poem it's really effective :)

its soo good. i am very sorry.

~jimnist07

The structure is a little halting, that could use a little bit of work. Otherwise, though, it's a very good poem. So sad! ;_;

MUY BUENO! I love the style and rhyming dance with romance! LOVE IT! (sad topic tho... but beautifully crafted.)

SO sad! Aw it makes me ache. ~Starlight
Ps. Its beautiful.

If this is about what I think it's about...oh, shut up.

It's well-written. Rhyme good.

::claps:: beautiful, very beautiful

aww! how sad!
very well written.
~crayonboxblues

the flow is a bit shakey now that I read it a second time. Try not to use so many ANDs. great otherwise