Awesome! I don't usually go for rhyming poems, but this one wasn't cheesey at all. You did a great job making this poem flow as nicely as it did.

i like this.. and yet, i don't... i onno/ it's weird... but in a good way :-)

what is the crime I wonder?
^_~

Awesome emotion displayed, nice work.
Keep writing.
-Seras

most incredibley awsome!

Cool, i want to know what the crime was. I like the "Sitting,sitting, in a cell"

i liked this poem a lot and especially the ending lines of each pharagraph. I also like the theme of the person sitting how the person sits no more and is now standing and kind of excepting there fate. really nice poem!

wow. very deep. i felt like i was in a cell too. all dark and creepy.

wow i really like this. I love the POV use (i cant remember if its 1, 2, or 3... maybe i should pay attention in english). keep it up

very cool... i love the repitiveness & how you don't know if hes innocent or not but you can still seel for him

Ya. Good job keeper. I want more nicholas though!HEHEHEHE have fun at school

Very interesting rhythm you've got going there. This is very good how it all flows together, though, and I happen to like unique rhythms!