Woah.. that was chilling! Rather tragic but still it was well written. The repeated word threw me of a lil bit, but not too much. Good job writing it. Other than that, flowed real nice. Keep it up! NB

I love this poem, it's tragic. Yet I feel it's somehow romantic

Thankyou for reviewing for me!

Well, that was little scary...I thought it was pretty good. I might just be picky, but I think the repeating words sounded a little odd. Maybe it's just me. Well, it was still a good write!

Cirien Phoenix

Oh wow, that's beautiful in a morbid sense. Very pretty and well written. Flows nicely as well.

beautiful. i love the way it was written. it flowed so smoothly. it was great :)