two years... has it really been that bloody long since you wrote this? anyways, it's really good. i agree that the underlined filthy needs to be changed, though.

Tan'erth did shoot his mouth off too much... O_o poor thing's gonna be beaten to a pulp...

I like the beer song! ^_^ Where did you get it? did you make it up?

Ugh. I hate the people worshipping Drainaith! they're so...pathetic... it's all a horrible lie and they can't see it! >_<

Anyways, update soon!

-dawn

PS: welcome back! *throws confetti at you* whee!

PPS: thanks for the review. ^_^

What is this? Don't I get any credit for coming up witha drinking song for you?! *bashes you with my broken chair* Anyway . . . I like it. It seems about the same as from the other hundred times I've read it . . . Drainaith is deliciously psycho and Tan'erth is an idiot. Yeehaw. Get the next part written already! *whip crack*-Mizu

oh. Looks mighty fine good. Do take it somewhere. Who/what is Drainaith? (I like prologues. This is a good one. Suspensey-like.) I know it's prolly useless to ask, seeing as you wrote this in 03, but pleasey please update. :)

Nice start. this looks to be a very promising story if you wish to continue it, very promising indeed.

I likes it!! Cool story, with many names I can't pronounce but that cause I'm stupid *ahem*. There are GAUNTLETS! BWA HA HA! (I have a silent obsession with gauntlets). Add more and I'll be a happy camper (although I'm not going camping cause it's the middle of winter and camping sucks). I'd ignore this review if I was you, because it's pointless. Update soon!

Bwahahaha! I have successfully read everything you wrote!I luv all of your poems, and this seems to be the only story and it's interesting. Please update on it! I would really really love to see where this is going. ^_^
P.S Thanks for reviewing Chapter 8. The end is near!

Wow, that's good stuff, the part about the swings actually gave me the shivers... spooky and cool ^_^ I like

MAWOHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
GRand lord of all evil here
hey shade2 [sniker]
bloody good[literaly]
i was most impressed the morbid nature brings out many cool out comes most ;likely and it will be good to read more
well anyways
hope to mail you soon
missing your mail #
Dave

thank you, i was having a good day, and now i have to live with that image. kirstin you're icky (hehehe that was said in a non angry way) but even though you're icky you write well. bye

What? lost... so short. i like it..as an intro. it need extrapolation and expanshion but its a good storyline teaser.

looks good, but on ething i don't get is in the third paragraph, when it says he lowered his head and looked north. wouldn't he have to raise his head to do that? anyways, it's pretty good, you khow, for a begining.

Now that is one of the strangest things I've read in a while . . .. first I'm certain it's in some relatively modern-day secluded village somewhere and then wham! Weird names and gauntlets! X_x;; Shocked me some . . . anyway, this is interesting, keep it up. *pause* Killing innocents . . . mwahahaha! ^_^
-Mizu

That is sad... YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! DON'T LEAVE ME HANGIN'! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!


Unicorn~

Agh*dies in love*
this is good ADD TO IT.
now.
come on this is the high light of my day.