Top marks!Chicken thing- the returnering.

bien.

wow. i just read this for the 2nd time in like 2 years and this is awesome. it's funnier than hell! plus you wanted reviews so happy birthday. *waves finger around in air as a celebratory motion*

(shakes head)this is very good , i was laughing the entire time, i dont mean to berate you too badly but get to work on some more of this story! please.

Screw what the textbooks say! The world began with a chicken! I liked this story a lot, although it was another kind of random out-of-the-blue story that I don't know how you came up with like stopping in the middle of a sentence *cheese* to say cheese.

ooh.Interesting. Hey, I'll read the reat when I ahve the time. ^_^

*blinks* very Terry Pratchett-ish. i can see that you like him...(Yup! Rincewind AND Death! ^^ so cool!)

Chickens...hehe...chickens...meow. pretty creative, with the chickens. mhm. yup. chickens. *nods* chickens.

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*laughs*

HAHAHAHAHA!Chickens!!HAHAHAHAHA!

LOL. this is really great! lol. I like the chickens. Are you gonna write more?

(zim: hmm...CHICKEN! mmhmm)

this is an interesting alternative to traditional views on... everything. i enjoyed it lotsa much.

Was this story inspired by "A hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy" by any chance? I think it's an "interesting" story

Woot! Itll turn out really long, but you need to finish this one. Extrapolate it a little and you might even be able to publish as a book. "British comedy at its finest...only... from America"

I curse you for daring to use the word "chartreuse." I had to look it up in the ** dictionary to find out what it meant and it was a color! A COLOR! *evil death glare* Ahem, anyway . . . interesting, totally screwed up, chicken-like, and reminds me much of Hitchhiker's Guide. But, whatever . . . do continue. It shall be, as always, interesting.
-Mizu

I've been waiting for this.
Very good, very funny.Refreshing campared to your previous works.