 shtarfish 2004-03-29 . chapter 1aw! this is really well written and it's true, i feel like this sometimes. so i'm sensitive, so sue me :) |
 Rosevine 2003-09-20 . chapter 1 ;.; so true..You write such good poetry (oh yea, looking through your account now that i've neglected it for so long ^^;) |
 Hele 2003-09-19 . chapter 1 It's very good, and, although I'm sure that I've said this before, thoughtful. It's really sad, and very well-written. |
 sathepine 2003-09-14 . chapter 1You know, sometimes our loudest cries ARE heard but that someone who hears them and truly understands them just might be someone whose cries are louder than ours. We should learn to listen too. Peace =)
Well, in connection to your poem, it's wonderfully written. The helplessness in it is sad and meaningful. This is a good read - thumbs up =) |
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